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Malayan born Azrul Mohd Khalib writes oft on issues affecting his native land. He is currently working in the issues related on HIV/AIDS, sex and world rights. He has compose many obligates in one of the daily email news show website called The Malayan Insider. His obligates have also appe ared in the Malaysiakini, the article Baby-Dumping Killing the mothers wont solve any problem, Ramadan a time to be considerate, Law still fuzzy on marital rape as well as non impossible for teens to be having sex and and so forth He has currently runs and battling an addiction to the A Song of Ice and attempt book series.Azrul Mohd Khalib has write many articles in the Malaysiakini in its letters section. The Malaysiakini is a political news website that has been widely considered to be one of the leading non-government owned paid-news agencies in Malaysia. Its news coverage concentrates mainly on local events, with a strong emphasis on items related to Malaysian politics, and also pu blishes columns, readers opinions in its letters section which claims to practice an editorial policy that is consistently confirmatory of justice, human rights, democracy, freedom of speech and good governance.And now the Malaysiakini is a utterance of reasoned discussion on the letters section and not an utilisation excessive editorial control on letters section. Summary The article emphasize the jejune maternity in Malaysia is continuously increasing from category to year and many puerile girls lost their lives because of resulting from maternalism and not go out them necessary support for those in need. Teenage gestation has no self-righteousness and despise by the people and how they look at them to judge them, neglect to extend military service that actually they are the victims of the issues.The rootage mentioned happens to teenage maternity in social milieu and runs his personal opinions to solve the teenage motherhood problems. accord to the Ministry of H ealth (MOH) shows that many of the untested people involved in the maternal quality. to a fault that, MOHs report show that some of the teenage pregnancy leave behind carry her own burden and end up on the statistics of the MOH. MOHs report also shows that some of the girls chose to commit suicide because of the cost of their lives. On the other hand, the root suggests providing the sexual reproductive health services for not just those who are married.Analysis of the beatation The designer is referring to Ministry of Health (MOH) reports and go to his late(a) discussion which focuses on teenage pregnancy in Malaysia to present his caput of view. He was not agree to look for people to file them and outraged when read the reports of babies found buried and will moan nearly escape of religious and moral fibre, from the point of view of this sentence, it is show that this happens canisternot be blame to those pregnancy of teenage and should find out the solutions to solve the problem.He support his point of view by giving the evidence, These girls are victims of an environment created due to our continued neglect of issues relating to sexual health such as ensuring the availability of proper sexual reproductive health education and services. The reservoir fix that the weaknesses of our social which aim to punish and harm but lack to provide necessary support for those in need. The formers point of view is that our social lack of providing the necessary support to the teenage pregnancy.The writer support his point of view by giving several evidence, which is We intromit people who call for hatred, discrimination and abuse on people who are gay or lesbian to give speeches to our students at schools but disapprove entry to educators who talk about sex education and teaching things uniform how to use a condom. The author also giving the evidence that turn up his point of view, which is The exploding numbers related to teenage pregnancy is a coa ch result of our societys failure to acknowledge and address our blinkered views of sex. The author state the weaknesses of our social that no government healthcare facility offers spontaneous abortion services for unwanted pregnancies or even condoms and sexual health training for singles and unmarried couples. From the point of view of this sentence, it is show that on that point is in truth few places turn to support and shelter those young women. The author state that reality of social culture in Malaysia has ready to judge for the teenage pregnancy mistake.The author support his point of view with several evidence, which there are more girls and teenagers living in fear as a result of an unwanted pregnancy. Most of them will increasingly resort to precarious abortion and DIY attempts to force a miscarriage. The author suggested nonaged marriage in the misguided and simplistic belief will solve the problem and this is break thing than being outside marriage. For the autho rs point of view, the underage married can hide the problem.Also, the authors point of view, there is another method which is religious convictions to improve the case of teenager pregnant. From the authors point of view, sex education may confuse to the children with the composite plant messages. The author show several evidence to support his point of view, which is When I grew up, I didnt need all of this and I was still equal to live, marry and have kids, a frequently comment from detractors of sex education. The author also suggested an effective way to improve the problem by providing germane(predicate) sexual reproductive health services. The authors point of view, not just provide to those who are married but for all the young people. Authors tone is recounting and invoking because he proves a dowry of evidence to show that he really knows about the teenage pregnancy and he provide the solutions for teenage pregnancy from this article. Thus, our country should take a ste p and refer the facts and ways from this article to solve the problems of teenage pregnancy in our country.Response The authors argument is practical and reasonable due to the authors argument is logical and well-reasoned. In the article, the author uses the information from MOH report and the recent discussion about the causes of teenage pregnancy in Malaysia can proved that the author knew the situation of teenage pregnancy and narrates the problems in this country. Thus, he supports it by referring to his research which he more industrial plant on sex and human rights issues. The authors argument is not objective rich to discuss the problem.He only narrates the role of teenage pregnancy happens in this country and not provide strong enough negative arguments to debate his own opinion. Besides that, the author wrote several causes in this article. He approached the causes happens and he described with the example of imagination. Apart from that, the author knew that the piece is realistic to dealing with this issue of sex. He supports it by referring the MOH report and news from nowadays and the case happens to the young girls who went to commit suicide.Even though the article is not objective enough, however, the author provide the information is sufficient to change the readers, education system, parents and government which not only belief in their own personal religious conviction, but government have to take an accomplish to improving the teenage pregnancy. The argument is credible because the author, Azrul Mohd Khalib,his essays have generally affix in the MalaysiaKini, The MalaysianInsider, and The New Strait Times. He had works for sex and human rights issues for many years. This article was released at Monday, 12 of Nov 2012 in the Malaysian Insider.Malaysian Insider is a website that covers the issues of the day, politics, business, lifestyle, sports and entertainment that showcasing issues and opinions of reports analyses view to us. Beside s that, the author uses his works on sex issues in long time research experiences, Ministry of Health reports and recent discussion of this issue that prove the evidence in the article, which show that the authors argument is credible enough to the audience and has the experience of insurance coverage the sex and human rights issues. Conclusion In conclusion, this article has been well written by the author and has high reliability.As a reader, I conjecture that this article is very useful especially for the government, parents and education system to continue about the socials role in the teenage pregnancy problems happens in our surrounding. I would like to recommend this article to several mean audience like teachers and schools and government because they are the main person can solve those socials role in the teenage pregnancy problems in the future. After reading this article, government should be able to provide effective solutions and trying their best in several ways to help teenage pregnancy in social life problems.